My Dad's Old Car


Rattle, hum, hiss, bang,
This car has got to go!
It really is quite sick,
It huffs and puffs and blows!

Crackle, whizz, cough, wheeze,
I think it's going to stop!
We've just gone round a corner
And the engine fell right off!

Rattle, hum, hiss, bang,
This car has got to go!
It really is quite sick,
It huffs and puffs and blows!

Crackle, whizz, cough, wheeze,
I think it's going to stop!
We've just gone round a corner
And the engine fell right off!

©2002 Gareth Lancaster

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On 26/06/2013 at 18:27 GMT ellie from engaland wrote:

"Cool"

On 13/10/2006 at 11:52 GMT Angelyn from northern mariana islands wrote:

"this was so funny! I'd like give it 5 stars! I'd say it's funny because my dad's car is like that,only the engine doesn't fall off."

On 09/10/2006 at 18:44 GMT thomas buhlman from uk wrote:

"it was really good"

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