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| "Chocolate Cake"
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Current Rating:  (4.04) |
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I'm scoffing lots of chocolate cake,
But not quite as much as I'd like!
I'm wolfing it down with a whirl of my spoon,
and it's flinging up, down, left and right!
It's hitting the walls and spraying the floor,
It's covered up Bessie our cat.
There's crumbs in my hair and on mother's best chair,
And the window's one choclatey splat.
But faster and faster I shovel it up,
Not bothered I'm missing my chops.
As it drips from my nose and collects in my ears,
Gloops drop from nose and go plop!
Then too quickly it's gone, there just was not enough,
As I'd said at the start of this smasher,
With my greedy delight (sloppy cake on the lights),
Not one spot found its way past my gnashers!
©2007 Gareth Lancaster
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On 08/10/2009 at 11:12 GMT,
year 3 wheelock primary school from UK wrote:
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| We liked this poem because we liked the describing words. It was really funny when the chocolate went over the cat |
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On 19/09/2009 at 19:48 GMT,
Chantalle from Vermont wrote:
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| I was drinking milk when I was reading this and all of sudden when I read it I laughed so hard milk came out of my nose! |
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On 01/06/2009 at 19:09 GMT,
Lauren from USA wrote:
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| I had to pick a poem to read to my class and I chosies this one because it was so funny and I love COCOLATE CAKE |
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On 27/05/2009 at 22:57 GMT,
kate castillo from pennsylvana wrote:
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| I think your poem is chocolately and good |
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On 06/05/2009 at 14:24 GMT,
Marry Saleic from Hollywood,California wrote:
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| So Yumilicious! |
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